I really enjoyed your slice. Each word carefully crafted to maximize effect. We, too, have a snowy Sunday...ugh...spring seems like a lifetime away!
Loved your haiku, how the title suggests one thing, but your words describe another. March can always be a teaser.
I really liked your haiku! Especially the "fat flakes" and "white cloak." I have a very strong image of the white snow on the green grass.
I really enjoyed your slice. Each word carefully crafted to maximize effect. We, too, have a snowy Sunday...ugh...spring seems like a lifetime away!
ReplyDeleteLoved your haiku, how the title suggests one thing, but your words describe another. March can always be a teaser.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your haiku! Especially the "fat flakes" and "white cloak." I have a very strong image of the white snow on the green grass.
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